Wednesday, September 26, 2012

Ninja Mouse

Once upon a time, there was a mouse named Frank. Frank was a real mini ninja. His mission was to recover the lost cheese of LeRat. He was working for his poor dad Paula. They had no money or food, so Frank decided to be a HERO.

The next day, he looked up on the internet as to where to find LeRat. LeRat was the place where the cheese was. It said that it was near Bishop’s shed. Bishop was a little bad superhero. “Ohhhh”, said Frank. Frank the ninga already met with Bishop. But Bishop ran away.

The next morning, Frank heard Bishop’s voice. HAHAHAHA. He looked outside. Bishop was ran holding Frank’s girlfriend. Running down the stairs, Frank rushed outside. The enemy Bishop hopped in his Ferrari and went off. Frank sat in his Bugatti and boosted of to the red Ferrari.

They both arrived in Bishop’s shed. Frank never knew where he was. He started sneaking through the living room. BOOM. Something went down. It was a cage. It snapped a little bit of his hair. “Hahahaha, who do I have here”, a deep voice said. I sounds like Bishop. “Whos here” Frank said. There was no reply.

Frank forgot he had a mini gun. He took it out of his bag and shot the cave. There was a hole at the cave. Finally he was out. He started to sniff through the way. He ended up in the toilet. There was the cheese.

He arrived in. He stopped outside the door. Frank grabbed a hammer from his pocket and threw it on the toilet. Nothing happened. He took one step inside. His arm came out of his pocket, and grabbed the cheese and runned away.

He was nearly home. He noticed he forgot his bugatti. When Frank arrived home his family hugged him with their love. That night they told stories and live happy till they were old. Real Old.

Tuesday, September 18, 2012

Playing Basketball

Walking down to the caught, I was really excited to play basketball. Do you like basketball? I do. Bouncing the up and down, I realized that I wasn't going fast enough.

"When are we going to do our shooting in the hoop", I asked our coach. Our coaches name was Tai and another person. I didn't know his name. So I called him Mat.

Finally we were up to our shooting. Running and bouncing the ball, it was time to shoot. Yay. I got it in. At the end of our warm up, we had a FUN game. I was number one. We had to run and get the ball, and start to bounce and shoot. I had to in. BUT... Sadly we lost. Poor our team. It was still fun.

Running back to our classroom, it was time for our lunch. I wonder what sport we are doing next term?

Friday, September 14, 2012

Funny Movie

This is a funny video. If you watch it 100 times, you can still laugh. Just enjoy.

Thursday, September 13, 2012

Thai Fish Cakes

Have you ever tasted or made Thai Fish Cakes. Point England did well, but sadly we never came first place. It was so easy because we never had to chop anything, but the other groups had to chop chop all day. Myfavorite part of the process is me Iisa cooking the Thai on the pan. It looked really nice. At home I want to cook it, But we don't have the right ingredients. Even I might already forget the ingredients.

Wednesday, September 12, 2012

My 50 Word Story

Flags up in the air, Richard smiled proudly. Winning the 100m sprint, is easy for Usain but not him. Celebrating for his country, he waved the flag up in the air. Even though he his happy outside, Richard is even happier in the inside. GOOD WORK RICHARD!!!

Tuesday, September 11, 2012

Yohan Blake

Yohan Blake was born on 26 December 1989. He is a Jamaican runner who competes in the 200 meters and 100 meters. He has 14 medals. Just a bit smaller than Usain Bolt's. Blake's best score for 100 meters is 9.69. His best on 200 meters is 19.26 seconds. His 200 meter is the second worlds record. Usain is just beating him.

Shalom Leaving

RING!!! Went the bell. Walking outside the door, I remembered that Shalom was leaving. I was about to leave without saying GOOD BYE. So I decided to go back and say bye. He was leaving to Australia. At Sydney.

As I went back, I saw him walking. I ran and said "Bye". I was about to cry. I try not to. It will be embarrassed. So I started to walk with him to my sister and his brother.

Walking to our older sister and brother, he said if I want some hot dogs. I said that he should go with it to the plane. He said Nah. So he gave some to me. And Brandon.

Nervously walking out the gate. I felt real sad. "BYE SHALOM", I shouted. He turned around and wave. Walking and thinking, I thought that it will be a disaster. WE MISS YOU SHALOM!!!

Monday, September 10, 2012

Tommy Kapai Wilson

Meeting in the hall, I saw a man. Who’s him. I don't know him. Finally it was the mans time to do whatever he want’s to do. “Kiora”, My name is Tommy Kapai Wilson”, He said bravely.

On the projector was a photo of him. Wow. I think he’s FAMOUS. Wait a minute. There is a book we have been talking about. It is called Kapai The Kiwi. Maybe he is the author for that book.Am I dreaming. This is AMAZING. I can’t believe that a famous author has come to our school.

“Putta Boom Boom”, he said. we started laughing. Hahahahahaha. He taught us 5 lessons. The first thing he said to make 10 people smile everyday. I turned around to my mate. Smile. He smiled. “Yay, I did one person smile. He said if someone does something bad, try to forgive them.

What is going to be the next lesson. “Wars and violence is dumb”. I thought he was right. Wars are dumb. Everybody is born with a gift. Thinking in my head, I was thinking what was the gift. And finally he said. SMILE.

Rich people has everything, but in life they have nothing. I thought about that. At the end of his talk, he read one of his favourite books he made. It was about a true story. There was a lady who met princess diana before she died.

Tommy went and interview her. When Tommy finished. He thought he would write a story about her. So he did. He started to write and think. He read the whole book to us. He even Gave some of his books to us.

Thursday, September 6, 2012

The Enormous Crocodile

Once upon a time there were two crocodile. One Enormous crocodile and one not so big. “Mmmm!!! I’m hungry”, said the enormous crocodile. I really like stuff with legs, arms, toe nails and feet. HUMAN BEINGS.

He started to leave. “WAIT”, said the not enormous crocodile said. “Why?”

“Because their bitter, their tough and they have babysitters, their fast you’ll come last and---”

“What’s with the song?”

“I don’t know>”



“You’re not cool. I’m leaving”


“Shut up.”

Swimming through the river, the enormous crocodile sneaked up to a big fat hippopotamus. He crept up to him. UKKK. GOBBLE GObblE GobblE. The enormous croc bit hippo’s leg. “AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!”, the big Hippo screamed in agony.

Wednesday, September 5, 2012


Wow!!! The Paralympics is so amazing!! My favorite Paralympics is the blind folded football. Isn't they amazing. My favorite player is Li Xiaoqiang.
My second is Dong Junjie.

Tuesday, September 4, 2012

Ms King

Ms King is my favourite teacher. She is never so mean like other teachers. She is the only best teacher I have had. So next year, I will want to be in Ms King's class. My favourite teacher. I like her so much. Every time we do something really nice to her, she does something nice to us. I really love her so much.

I Am Making Movies 3

"What the heck". What is Making Movies 3 means. Oh, I know. We have to make movies. Not any movies. It can be scary, funny, and sorts of stuff. Our group, group 2, are making are scary one. It has Loch Ness Monster. There wasn't a real monster. We had to draw it. Underneath is our scripts and our ideas. I am Drake. Hope you like it. :)

(Kiara and Abby drag Natalya to the beach)
Abby: Come ON!! Being at the beach is way better than practising your violin.

Kiara: YEA! Wait I know... you can practise here while we play and explore!

Natalya: Fine. But if I get in trouble from my parents, IT’S ALL. YOUR. FAULT.

Abby: Fine...... Come on Kiara. Let’s go play.

Kiara: YAY!! PLAY TIME!!

(Kiara and Abby walks off into the distance)

Natalya: (Shouting) Ok!! Just leave me here.... TO PRACTICE. ALONE! BY MYSELF.

Abby and Kiara: (Shouting back while running) Ok!

Kiara: Hehe! She looks like she’s having fun!

Abby: Hey look!

Kiara: A cave!
(Kiara and Abby go into the cave, Natalya sees them go in)

Natalya: Really? Where are they going now? IT’S LIKE I’M INVISIBLE!

(Natalya walking to the cave)

Abby: Natalya's coming! Let’s hide.
(Abby and Kiara step back from the entrance when they bump into Drake)

Drake: AHHH!! Get off me! Get off me! You’ll never eat me!!
(Drake jumps up, the girls scream)

Kiara: Wait. I don’t eat people.

Abby: Oh naah! I don’t know what’s wrong with that chick.


Natalya: What’s coming? (As she enters the cave)

Abby: Hey!!! came.

Kiara: Natalya, are you practicing in here?

Natalya: Nevermind about that, who’s this?

Abby: Some crazy dude.

Drake: I’m not crazy!! came for me! I’ve been hiding here from it!

Kiara: What have you been hiding from?

Drake: The lochness monster!

Abby: Told you he was crazy.

(Abby and Natalya groan)

Abby: There is none you-

Natalya: This is just rubbish. Let’s go now.
(Starts walking out and Natalya sits down and practises her violin and sees a tail pop out of the water then she stops all of a sudden and runs back into the cave.)

Abby: I thought we were going??

Kiara: Yea!


Natalya: Um... maybe we should stay here and...(um) look after this crazy man.

Kiara: But I thought you said.........
(In the background Drake or the crazy man is yelling don’t eat me!)

Natalya: Nope, I changed my mind. Let’s stay here for a bit.

Abby: If you say so?! Well, what should we do?
(The girls are all thinking)

Kiara: Maybe the crazy man can tell us a story! I mean he is old and he looks like he has a story to tell?

Abby: Nice thinking! (High fives each other)

Natalya: Well? Do you have a story?

Drake: Ever since the lochness monster I can’t remember anything except for the lochness monster story!

Natalya: Then tell us that story!

Drake: It was a long time ago. There were 3 girls on the beach like you guys.

Kiara: Oooo.... interesting....

Drake: Back to the story... These girls were very curious and and they loved exploring. One of these girls also played the violin like you (pointing to Natalya). One day the girls came down to the beach and one girl had the violin with her.

Natalya: This sounds alot like us!

Drake: But it’s not you... Anyway, the girls were dancing around and the girl with the violin started to play. Soon a huge monster came out of the water and......

Natalya, Kiara and Abby: AND...

Drake: Nothing..... that’s pretty much all I remember.

Natalya:That story was very interesting. And those girls sounded very much like us. But I don’t get how the monster came out of the water, what was summoning him?

Kiara: Maybe the girl playing the violin summoned the monster?

Natalya: That’s right! When I went outside, I started to play my violin and a saw a tail pop out of the water.

Abby: So that’s why you came back in so worried.

Natalya: Violin playing attracts the lochness monster!

Kiara: Cool!

Abby: Well, what should we do now?

Kiara: Maybe Natalya can get the monster in here and-

Drake: I’ll attack it by surprise.... Just a thought, don’t have to listen to me.

Abby: That’s a good idea! Are you up for it Natalya?

Natalya: Um.... (thinking)..... Sure, lets give it a go!
(Natalya goes outside and starts playing the violin and then the lochness appears, animation)

Scene 4

Natalya: (Stops playing and looking up at the monster) Oh my gosh! It worked! Hey guys, come look! (Walking into the cave to get Kiara and them) Hey Drake, you need to come see this!

Drake: No! I can’t. I don’t want to still remember all the stuff that he did to me in the past. GET THAT THING AWAY!!!

Natalya: Ok, but aren’t you going to kill it?

Josh: (Walks into the cave) I’ll kill it!

Natalya: Um... Who are you?

Josh: I’m a distant relative. Believe me, I CAN KILL THIS THING. Come on Drake. (Says dramatically) Let’s kill this thing. NOW!

Drake: NOW!

Josh: NOW!

Drake: NOW!

Josh: NOW!

Abby: Today would be fine ladies.

Kiara: Oh that’s enough! Let’s die this thing!

Natalya: And for a minute I thought you were smart Ara. Let’s slay this mother!

( Abby, Kiara and Natalya run up to the monster and look up at nothing because it’s green screen. When they kill it, it’s all going to be in animation)

Josh: Wow ladies. That was pretty impressive. Wanna go....

Kiara, Abby and Natalya: (Walking out of cave) NO!


Re-crafting Aldora's Writing

Today we practiced re-crafting a piece of writing. The first paragraphs belongs to Aldora, and the second is mine.

“On your marks, get set, “Bang” shouted Mr Burt. Off we went trying hard not to bang into each other. I was already muddy. Luckily I didn’t slip like some other girls did at the start line.

Standing at the start line, I waited nervously for Mr Burt to sound his clapper. “On your marks, get set, BANG!!!, shouted Mr Burt. As I set off towards the bushes, I tried not to crash into the other competitors. Passing my friends, I tried not to slip.