Shalom Leaving

RING!!! Went the bell. Walking outside the door, I remembered that Shalom was leaving. I was about to leave without saying GOOD BYE. So I decided to go back and say bye. He was leaving to Australia. At Sydney.

As I went back, I saw him walking. I ran and said "Bye". I was about to cry. I try not to. It will be embarrassed. So I started to walk with him to my sister and his brother.

Walking to our older sister and brother, he said if I want some hot dogs. I said that he should go with it to the plane. He said Nah. So he gave some to me. And Brandon.

Nervously walking out the gate. I felt real sad. "BYE SHALOM", I shouted. He turned around and wave. Walking and thinking, I thought that it will be a disaster. WE MISS YOU SHALOM!!!

Tommy Kapai Wilson

Meeting in the hall, I saw a man. Who’s him. I don't know him. Finally it was the mans time to do whatever he want’s to do. “Kiora”, My name is Tommy Kapai Wilson”, He said bravely.

On the projector was a photo of him. Wow. I think he’s FAMOUS. Wait a minute. There is a book we have been talking about. It is called Kapai The Kiwi. Maybe he is the author for that book.Am I dreaming. This is AMAZING. I can’t believe that a famous author has come to our school.

“Putta Boom Boom”, he said. we started laughing. Hahahahahaha. He taught us 5 lessons. The first thing he said to make 10 people smile everyday. I turned around to my mate. Smile. He smiled. “Yay, I did one person smile. He said if someone does something bad, try to forgive them.

What is going to be the next lesson. “Wars and violence is dumb”. I thought he was right. Wars are dumb. Everybody is born with a gift. Thinking in my head, I was thinking what was the gift. And finally he said. SMILE.

Rich people has everything, but in life they have nothing. I thought about that. At the end of his talk, he read one of his favourite books he made. It was about a true story. There was a lady who met princess diana before she died.

Tommy went and interview her. When Tommy finished. He thought he would write a story about her. So he did. He started to write and think. He read the whole book to us. He even Gave some of his books to us.

The Enormous Crocodile

Once upon a time there were two crocodile. One Enormous crocodile and one not so big. “Mmmm!!! I’m hungry”, said the enormous crocodile. I really like stuff with legs, arms, toe nails and feet. HUMAN BEINGS.

He started to leave. “WAIT”, said the not enormous crocodile said. “Why?”

“Because their bitter, their tough and they have babysitters, their fast you’ll come last and---”

“What’s with the song?”

“I don’t know>”

“.........”

“.........”

“You’re not cool. I’m leaving”

“Goodbye!”

“Shut up.”

Swimming through the river, the enormous crocodile sneaked up to a big fat hippopotamus. He crept up to him. UKKK. GOBBLE GObblE GobblE. The enormous croc bit hippo’s leg. “AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!”, the big Hippo screamed in agony.

Paralympics

Wow!!! The Paralympics is so amazing!! My favorite Paralympics is the blind folded football. Isn't they amazing. My favorite player is Li Xiaoqiang.

My second is Dong Junjie.

Ms King

Ms King is my favourite teacher. She is never so mean like other teachers. She is the only best teacher I have had. So next year, I will want to be in Ms King's class. My favourite teacher. I like her so much. Every time we do something really nice to her, she does something nice to us. I really love her so much.

I Am Making Movies 3

"What the heck". What is Making Movies 3 means. Oh, I know. We have to make movies. Not any movies. It can be scary, funny, and sorts of stuff. Our group, group 2, are making are scary one. It has Loch Ness Monster. There wasn't a real monster. We had to draw it. Underneath is our scripts and our ideas. I am Drake. Hope you like it. :)

(Kiara and Abby drag Natalya to the beach)
Abby: Come ON!! Being at the beach is way better than practising your violin.

Kiara: YEA! Wait I know... you can practise here while we play and explore!

Natalya: Fine. But if I get in trouble from my parents, IT’S ALL. YOUR. FAULT.

Abby: Fine...... Come on Kiara. Let’s go play.

Kiara: YAY!! PLAY TIME!!

(Kiara and Abby walks off into the distance)

Natalya: (Shouting) Ok!! Just leave me here.... TO PRACTICE. ALONE! BY MYSELF.

Abby and Kiara: (Shouting back while running) Ok!

Kiara: Hehe! She looks like she’s having fun!

Abby: Hey look!

Kiara: A cave!
(Kiara and Abby go into the cave, Natalya sees them go in)

Natalya: Really? Where are they going now? IT’S LIKE I’M INVISIBLE!

(Natalya walking to the cave)

Abby: Natalya's coming! Let’s hide.
(Abby and Kiara step back from the entrance when they bump into Drake)

Drake: AHHH!! Get off me! Get off me! You’ll never eat me!!
(Drake jumps up, the girls scream)

Kiara: Wait. I don’t eat people.

Abby: Oh naah! I don’t know what’s wrong with that chick.

Drake: IT’S COMING!

Natalya: What’s coming? (As she enters the cave)

Abby: Hey!!! Natalya...you came.

Kiara: Natalya, are you practicing in here?

Natalya: Nevermind about that, who’s this?

Abby: Some crazy dude.

Drake: I’m not crazy!! It.....it came for me! I’ve been hiding here from it!

Kiara: What have you been hiding from?

Drake: The lochness monster!

Abby: Told you he was crazy.

Kiara: A MONSTER! WHERE!
(Abby and Natalya groan)

Abby: There is none you-

Natalya: This is just rubbish. Let’s go now.
(Starts walking out and Natalya sits down and practises her violin and sees a tail pop out of the water then she stops all of a sudden and runs back into the cave.)

Abby: I thought we were going??

Kiara: Yea!

SCENE 3:

Natalya: Um... maybe we should stay here and...(um) look after this crazy man.

Kiara: But I thought you said.........
(In the background Drake or the crazy man is yelling don’t eat me!)

Natalya: Nope, I changed my mind. Let’s stay here for a bit.

Abby: If you say so?! Well, what should we do?
(The girls are all thinking)

Kiara: Maybe the crazy man can tell us a story! I mean he is old and he looks like he has a story to tell?

Abby: Nice thinking! (High fives each other)

Natalya: Well? Do you have a story?

Drake: Ever since the lochness monster I can’t remember anything except for the lochness monster story!

Natalya: Then tell us that story!

Drake: It was a long time ago. There were 3 girls on the beach like you guys.

Kiara: Oooo.... interesting....

Drake: Back to the story... These girls were very curious and and they loved exploring. One of these girls also played the violin like you (pointing to Natalya). One day the girls came down to the beach and one girl had the violin with her.

Natalya: This sounds alot like us!

Drake: But it’s not you... Anyway, the girls were dancing around and the girl with the violin started to play. Soon a huge monster came out of the water and......

Natalya, Kiara and Abby: AND...

Drake: Nothing..... that’s pretty much all I remember.

Natalya:That story was very interesting. And those girls sounded very much like us. But I don’t get how the monster came out of the water, what was summoning him?

Kiara: Maybe the girl playing the violin summoned the monster?

Natalya: That’s right! When I went outside, I started to play my violin and a saw a tail pop out of the water.

Abby: So that’s why you came back in so worried.

Natalya: Violin playing attracts the lochness monster!

Kiara: Cool!

Abby: Well, what should we do now?

Kiara: Maybe Natalya can get the monster in here and-

Drake: I’ll attack it by surprise.... Just a thought, don’t have to listen to me.

Abby: That’s a good idea! Are you up for it Natalya?

Natalya: Um.... (thinking)..... Sure, lets give it a go!
(Natalya goes outside and starts playing the violin and then the lochness appears, animation)

Scene 4

Natalya: (Stops playing and looking up at the monster) Oh my gosh! It worked! Hey guys, come look! (Walking into the cave to get Kiara and them) Hey Drake, you need to come see this!

Drake: No! I can’t. I don’t want to still remember all the stuff that he did to me in the past. GET THAT THING AWAY!!!

Natalya: Ok, but aren’t you going to kill it?

Josh: (Walks into the cave) I’ll kill it!

Natalya: Um... Who are you?

Josh: I’m a distant relative. Believe me, I CAN KILL THIS THING. Come on Drake. (Says dramatically) Let’s kill this thing. NOW!

Drake: NOW!

Josh: NOW!

Drake: NOW!

Josh: NOW!

Abby: Today would be fine ladies.

Kiara: Oh that’s enough! Let’s die this thing!

Natalya: And for a minute I thought you were smart Ara. Let’s slay this mother!

( Abby, Kiara and Natalya run up to the monster and look up at nothing because it’s green screen. When they kill it, it’s all going to be in animation)

Josh: Wow ladies. That was pretty impressive. Wanna go....

Kiara, Abby and Natalya: (Walking out of cave) NO!

THE END

Re-crafting Aldora's Writing

Today we practiced re-crafting a piece of writing. The first paragraphs belongs to Aldora, and the second is mine.

“On your marks, get set, “Bang” shouted Mr Burt. Off we went trying hard not to bang into each other. I was already muddy. Luckily I didn’t slip like some other girls did at the start line.

Standing at the start line, I waited nervously for Mr Burt to sound his clapper. “On your marks, get set, BANG!!!, shouted Mr Burt. As I set off towards the bushes, I tried not to crash into the other competitors. Passing my friends, I tried not to slip.