Walking to the starting line, I could feel my nerves shaking. At the reserve, the 10 and 9 year old boys were ready for action. “On your marks, get set, GO!!!”. I heard Mr Burt say go. As I ran, I was hoping I would come first. If I did come first I will be proud of myself.
As I was running through the slippery bridge, I almost fell over.Down the the bush, it felt really tired. When are we going to finish. Running through the bush, I saw light. “Yay, I am nearly finish.
Puffing through our school, I saw the finish line. Finally I finished the race. When I went to sit down I saw Frank passing the line. “Frank I beat you”, I said to him. “I don’t care”, he said.
When we were finished we were washing our legs because our feet was dirty.
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